Hurt

by Mia   Jul 8, 2007


He kept on saying
those things in her ear
until her body shook
under the rising fear.

More than ever
he hurt her inside
and although she kept begging,
he took all her pride.

She woke up too late
the very next day
and through the gate
he had finally run away.

She was left with the tears,
her body weeping.
And even after days
she still felt that sting.

Time has passed
since she was ripped inside.
She grew stronger
and today she won't hide.

She waits on a chance
and it isn't too late
that one day this girl
will kill him with hate.

This man was my friend
and I will never forget
to make him pay,
make him feel regret.

I won't stop.
neither did you.
this time it's me
being so cruel.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Thank you for your comment. I really liked this poem you wrote. I felt like you were telling a story from my life. I love how i can relate to this. revenge is sweet. lol, anyway, i hope this never really happened to you. and even if it did, it sounds like you rose from the ashes and are doing better now. great job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    And you say you dont write poems. well this looks like a pretty awesome one to me!

    Absolutely Fantastic!

  • 16 years ago

    by A F

    Thanks for the comment hun.

    I know how you exactly feel.
    Boys just suck alot.
    Yeah, there will be the time when it's our time to come back with vengeance ):

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Man! man! man! Another good poem, obv have a good flow.. It's feel like 1940s, thinkin back in the years the way happen in that poem of yours. U r A-M-A-z-I-N-G!

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    You have an amazing way with words. i really like the feeling that is obviously put in it. great job :) keep it up.

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