One....

by lisa   Jul 8, 2007


One glimpse,my heart lyquifys
Stolen stars placed in your eyes.

One kiss,my heart illumes
Savour the love surrounding the room

One touch,my body trembles
Feel the heat running from my ankles.

One word brings music to my ears
Your placid voice reduces fears.

Let our hearts intertwine as one
And our love shine like the summer sun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Wow. i love this. you spelled liquifies wrong though.. =D <3<3 peace & love <3<3

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    So intense in so few words! It was beautiful. I really enjoyed the way you described everything.
    As a side note, I would just like to say thank you for the sweet comments! I love when people take the time to tell me what they think!
    Means alot,
    Charisma* :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , wonderful choice of words loved it , from start to finish , little different from what I been reading , but thats good , great job , keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "Stolen stars placed in your eyes"

    that line is incredible!!!...and the whole poem as well, i love the metaphorical choice of words that you used to describe your feelings, it makes it that much more effective and powerful..and you never broke the flow either, great work 10/5!!

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