Loves first strike

by lisa   Oct 29, 2009


When love first strikes
Your heart will burn
Your head will go dizzy
Your stomach will churn
You'll start to lose balance
The room will spin around
You'll start to feel weaker
Your heart starts to pound
Words in your head
Will get lost in a whirl
Instead of thinking
Your mind will twirl
Love is so passionate
So beautifull and sweet
Without love theres no life
No breath...no heartbeat.x

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh... A wonderful write about love. Loved the rhyming and the pace of the poem. An very enjoyable read :)

    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by lisa

    THANKS FOR YOUR GOOD COMMENTS X

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    This is a very quote poem...Loved the rhyming and worded humorously..