by Dark Demise Jul 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
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The world will surround your innocence |
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Wow, this poem absolutely left me speechless. It had so many touching words. The image from this was very powerful and the flow was just perfect. Really good job with this one. |
by Miu
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Just amazing, how u equal everybody in this poem. You must be very intellegent. Thinking out loud, really loved it all, thinking about life itself and how it really is. A great idea. Nice chose of words. Really meaningful. |
by Kalee
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This is a really good poem. The flow was great and the wording perfect. 5/5 |
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Awesome write, very meaningful. The flow was good, keep it up. |
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I think this is a wonderful write, full of expression, emotion, and truth. There were a few spelling errors and grammatical things, such as "there" |