Found and Lost

This is truly a sad piece. Everyone who reads this will probably cry their tears and relate to what you re going through. Emotions were very strong and the words were simple.

I left the light
and returned to the dark
Where I wait solemnly
Until a new start.

I really liked that part, puts everything together.

Ending is truly amazing. This isn't classic love poem which is great. This poem isn't pathetic like most of love poems on this site, it is unique and excellently written. 5/5

It was so sweet, yet sad, yet i loved it. it was perfect. it had so much depth and emotion, and it was great 5/5

Opps I don't mean fire children I mean burning poisonious Oak. Well you'd like fire children too then. They were all made around the same time and all have the same quality I think. Well I think I'll browse around a little more around your poems.

Thanks for your poem comment. :) You'd like crime sene waltz if you liked fire children. I wrote them around the same time so you can see th similarity of the quality. I really liked this one. I gave it a five. The rhyming was pretty consistant and it didn't once say the word love which I liked because it made me want to check and make sure it was a love poem. Oh yeah ----->5 Yay five!