Forever ends to soon
by Si sI Jul 12, 2007
|
You said forever |
Did You Like This Poem?
Latest Comments
-
16 years ago
by CEE CEE
That is soooooo true FOREVER ENDS TOO SOON!!
-
16 years ago
by Ixora
I thought this one had a bit of a rocky start but it was great otherwise. i really love the ending sentence, probably because its so true and im sure many people would agree with you on that one. Beautiful poem though i vote 5/5 ^_^
*^*crow*^* -
16 years ago
by Fsams
Si, this is a nice poem and it flows well. There is a minute mistake, thats u have to use too, not to in the heading as well as the last line. Other than its great. Keep writing
-
16 years ago
by kelsey
Awsome!!
