Its a really sad poem and it really touched me. Can't wait to read part 3. Great job. 5/5

5/5 awww thiz waz so sad juzt like the firzt part...i almost cried man thiz waz my favorite stanza of them all
and this stanza

Instead you keep telling me
"Forget me, find someone else"
You tell me, how could that be
And how can I love someone else

man that really touched me so much...and it flowed so beautifully...keep doing what u do cuz u do it oh so well..man u so brilliant

much luv
peachez

The continueation of the first fit together flawlessly. Great job. i love the way this is written. it also has a wonderful rythm. 7/5

Instead you keep telling me
"Forget me, find someone else"
You tell me, how could that be
And how can I love someone else

Wow what a superb ending!
I am definitly gonna read the next part!
LOved it