Thanks for the advice

it's noaw in the funny section

Awh. I think this work was quite adorable and cute; in fact, I find the part wherein the people are squirming and yawning in boredom, perhaps. :] I together with others is unaware of such subsequent yawns. Amusing, yet endearing to say the least. Hopefully, it isn't a real contagious disease. Nicely written, nonetheless. 5/5

"This contagious disses is here,"
`I think you meant to say disease rather than disses, do you not...?

Take care,
Marian.

Whoops. My apologies for the double post, but I did a horrible mistake. :| Anyway, I actually find the part wherein the people are squirming and yawning in boredom quite comical. =] Hehe. Regards.

This was quite a cute poem to tell you the truth. Like Marian said it was truely adorable. I found it to be sweet. This was a different subject unique I must say. You did a great job with writing such a lovely poem which I'm sure so many people have enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work.

5/5
~mel

Hehehe...I liked this poem alot it made me smile....I enjoyed this a lot thank you for puting a smile on my face lol... i give it a 5/5....

This poem is so witty and unexpected. excellent descriptions. great job. [=

:o) ...that's very cute!

Lol, as i read that with the imagery you gave off, i yawned twice, and i'm still going. i loved it, 5/5

Ha! This is cute. I always said the yawn was contagious! Cute subject, decent flow, definitely a fun poem to read. Two things, though:

"it now spreads threw out us all."
(threw out should be throughout)

"This contagious disses is here,"
(is disses supposed to be disease?)

Well done!
Keep it up.
Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

The terrible yawn XD What a funny story. I liked it very much, not a sleepy type myself but I know some sleepy people. A definite 5/5

Made me giggle :0)

apparently if u see someone yawn u self contously think they are stealing your air so u try and get as much as u can by too yawning!!

dnt ask how i know that... lol well done :0)

Haha yeah, yawning is a disease!
on suggestion

"it now spreads threw out us all."
should be
"it now spreads through out us all."

5/5