Wanderer's Shadow

by HiddenPoet   Jul 13, 2007


Darkness bears a secret
A shadow without a name
Deathly black smoke coated within
A corruption of deep pain

A hurting in a happy place
No shelter is my home
A cursed wanderer that I be
All time stops with me alone

A skeleton of life I walk
Unknown to one and all
A scar shown and lies burnt
Emotions built a thorny wall

Searching for the promised peace
War should be now slain
We cast our evils on enemies
But the shadows still remain

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  • 15 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    One word AWESOME!!!! lol
    5/5 X)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aage Crow

    I really like the wording in this poem and the flow was great. Keep up the great work. ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Madison

    Incredible check out some of my work, but yours is incredidble

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    We cast our evils on enemies
    But the shadows still remain

    that line perfectly states the essence of human instinct - we never blame ourselves. if we did we wouldnt have gangs and wars and abuse and we would probably all be a little kinder.

  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    "Darkness bears a secret
    A shadow without a name"

    I FREAKIN LOVE HOW YOU STARTED IT AND FROM THIS TO THE END I WAS LOVIN IT

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