Comments : Sleep Deamon's (Senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by X2892

    It was short but good, i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great Senryu :) I like your choice of words, keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Great poem!! Short, but with a lot of meaning in just a few very well chosen words! You are a great writer... and I look forward to reading more of your work :-) 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This poem was beautiful. I know how hard it is to protray the full emotion and elegance in haiku's but you did an excellent job in doing so!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I voted this a 3 cause i didnt feel the way it was that short. you could of made this better by making it longer

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem. You created powerful atmosphere with just a few words. It is really deep... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem is a little different from the rest I have read so far. To me, this one sounds a bit creepy.. nothing wrong with that though, I like how this one is an odd ball in the group.

    5/5 ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Amazing.I love how short it is because it makes you think and imagine different things.
    Another great poem,
    A true 5/5,
    Rado =)