Collapse At The Deserted Site........

by Malini Nair   Jul 14, 2007


I need to be next to you,
Felt like sharing every breath with you,
Unseen dreams together i did try to sew,
Dreamt a dream which i could never pursue,
This secret couldn't be shared with friends i knew....

At night i cannot sleep,
Unnecessorily i feel to weep,
Thoughts,feelings,memories,
I try to bury them so deep,
Sometimes too overwhelming to keep,
Tried sowing patience in me,
Alas ! it would never reap....

Future is uncertain in day after tomorrow
Tend to bottle up my miseries and sorrows,
Even though it seems so clear,
The mind mingles with a sensed fear...

Trying to create a verse at night,
Or just trying to get you out of my sight,
Talking to you was always a delight,
I don't know whether itz wrong or right,
Insides never let go without a fight,
Future never seemed bright,
When i write this poem
Under the starry light......

Just hold me tight,
Never leave me alone
Or take off flight
Cause i just might,
Collapse at that deserted site...............

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    This is an amazing poem!
    I love your choice of vocabulary.
    It's a bit lenghtly but doesn't lose it's meaning at all.
    Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent dear I couldn't find any flaws in this piece, its just awesome and I really love the usage of the word sow in this piece. I just remembered one line I wrote “sow your happiness, share your sorrows”. Thanks for sharing. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow amazing poem i really like this one you are obviously a very talented writer

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