Selfishly Burning an Innocent Girl

by Woe   Jul 15, 2007


Feelingless hearts in this cold, cruel world,
selfishly burning an innocent girl.

She loses all who she thinks are her friends.
Love is unreal. Everything ends.

Promises now, mean less than dirt.
She's lost all trust, refusing to be hurt.

And still come the tears, all night she cries.
Remembering the promises, the selfish lies.

Meaningless love notes, a waste of lead,
Could be used in her note to explain why she's dead.

She watches them laugh, She watches them smile,
She fills with jealousy, it's been a long while.

A helpless victim of their high school thrills,
She tries to stay numb but the pain kills.

Lost in the darkness, Her only friends are drugs,
used to replace desired kisses and hugs.

Nobody sees, No one will care,
when she's gone they'll forget she was there.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blake

    Very nice i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by the song writer

    It's very well written
    and I enjoyed reading it.
    you depicted your emotion very well.

    (thanks for the comment)

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Catastrophic*

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow u really did a phenomenal job on this 1. it had a catostrphic feel to it. i loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    I like the fact that it rhymes pretty good although the lines are long... its easy to read and it flows well.
    good job.