Comments : Dreaming

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Ohh wow....id love to escape into the dream world and explore..this is a well dnoe poem..
    keep it up
    tk care 5/5
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the imagery in the poem, I also like the rhyming of the poem, well done. I like your dream xD Could you please write a second part of this poem xD

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by X2892

    Well written poem, i like it a lot, also it gets a 5/5 :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Wow. This poem is simple yet really great. It was origional, and detailed, and very cute. =) the flow was excellent and the word choice was amazing.

    In my dreams I can be anyone and anything I desire
    A princess with her prince in illustrious attire
    Those were my favorite lines!!

    Greast poem!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    In my opinion that was absolutely fantastic when i read it without the 3rd stanza but the 3rd needs to be changed i think but apart from that the rhyimg, the style and the wording was all really good top marks :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Oscar

    Oooh i had to reread this poem because i loved it so much. it was really well written, rhymed, and delivered. this is definately one of my favorites from yours so far.

    5/5