Very sad! it was well told but im sorry for what has happened...

I liked the message of the poem, but I couldn't get into the rhythm. Its a touching poem though :)

4/5

Quillx

Truly beautiful, gosh nothing i ever read made me felt so good, am in love with your writing cos u write, crisp and tangible stuff with such sweet emotion that it moves me...keep it up gurl...i just love u and i give it a BIG 5, what do u say?

Bree sadly your your best friend is now where she belongs with god in heaven he must have wanted her there otherwise she would still be with you, I am always here for you, i don't know what to say or do for you but I am and always here for you and I really do care, and I know you realize that,your friend Steve xx
may she rip in gods arm,he will care for her now ,you must also now help your friends cope as well

Still think its really beautiful

Good job...its very touching!
~*~Skye~*~

Aww this was sad..but very beautiful, and touching.
i'm sorry about what happened. =[ i hope everything turned out alright though.
all the best!
--Viola

Things do happen for a reason, never forget that! A message that stays constant, and an endearing poem.

Nice poem!!!!!!!

That was really deep and sad,but it deffinally had a meaning,it was great loved it