Harry Potter.......

by Malini Nair   Jul 16, 2007


UNblinking there he stood,
With a smile i never really understood,
Death eaters came always in a hood,
He fought Voldermort As bravely he could.....
He will always fight for the truth,
I know he would...

He always has his friends besides him,
With them never anything seems to go dim,
He has that lightning bolt scar,
Which reminds him
That he is fighting a constant undetectable war..
Even though he wishes to live somewhere far,
He finds himself dropped at so called home,
In the Dursely's car...

Well he has been enough fortunate,
To cross over things ,
He could ever hate....
Sometimes for his classes he is late,
But each time
He could always rely on his mate...

He is the brightest wizard,
I could possibly know,
He wards of the mighty lizard,
With an awsome blow.....
He easily tends to make a foe,
But we all know,
Harry does not like to Show...

Well hope you keep doing good,
Save the wizarding world as you should,
Hope you have a great time,
With your friends,
Wishing that,
The story never ends.......

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  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    YAYAYAY! I WAS SOOOOOO HAPPY TO SEE THERE WAS POEMS 'BOUT HARRY POTTER! I absolutely LOVE Harry =D

    long time fan =) ive read all the books at least 4 times - give or take a few - and ive watched all the movies probably way more than 30 times each. lol.

    you did an EXTREMELY wonderful job =D

    omg...im going to see t he 7th movie this thanksgiving holiday! xD
    keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Madison

    Love the poem harry potter is the best

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow what a descriptive piece of poetry. I loved the story and its really beautifully explained. THe whole poem is 100% poetic and very cohesive. I loved and enjoyed reading this piece. Well deserved 5/5

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    When I said the rhyming was forced, I meant lines like this:

    Sometimes for his classes he is late,

    Where you change the sentence around so that it isn't structured the way it should be. No one would ever say, 'For his classes he is late', they would always say, 'He is late for his classes', which obviously I know doesn't rhyme, but the poem flows a lot better when you form sentences correctly. I'm sorry if I offended you by saying that; I definitey didn't mean to.

    Em xxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    I was very pleased to see someone had written a Harry Potter-related poem. :D My only criticism is that, now and then, the rhyming is a bit forced. But otherwise, great!

    Em xxxxxx

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