I loved it!.
Short and Sweet.
The emotion's radiating from each word, where heartfelt dashed with a bit of confusion.
I love how you portrayed your feelings.

A really good write.
Much enjoyed,
Elaine.

Yes it is a rushed 1 minute poem, and im not changing it as i believe these kind of poems are those that is a fresh feeling that you feel that moment and you just put it down which shows your talent at the time needed. thank you for the explaination alot.

Like elaine said very mysterious.
I enjoyed reading it.Great work.
Miranda

Wow. This poem made me ache for I'm sort of going through the same dilema. -.- anywho, it was simple yet beautiful, and to the point. Excellent read.

5/5

This is simple but yet so touchy, I like it dude short and clear direct to the point and with sweetness on it, a true feeling of a great man and poet, i love it...

I liked it, it was short and it got the message across, but i feel you probably could have added a little bit more to increase the power of the message but i still think you did a great job with what you had. I give it a 5/5

Sad n short poem but it was great poem dast xosh :)

God do i know that feeling. beautiful poem, i loved it, i always enjoy your poems goran. wonderful yet again.

It was short, sweet, yet it made perfect sense, you got the point across wonderfully. i loved it. i know how you feel with this poem, when they are gone it doesn't matter if your upset with them, you still want them back. great work yet again. 5/5

Mm. i hate being separated from someone for so long. it hurts because when you want comfort, they aren't there to hold you.

another nicely done poem hun. =]

I loved it so much

i mean it was short but it was good
and the title was great

it drew me to the poem

nothing needs to be fixed really

but the flow could have been a little better

all in all a great read, 5/5

O_O wow is this really a 1 minute poem? That was superb! haha!

I really adore this two lines.
"Yet every second
I am in search of a new word from you."

Wow short but sweet 4/5

Short and to the point-love it!

I did like this poem alot. I found it to be different to your usual and I'm not quite sure how. The flow was quick on it which I did like. And the last line ended this piece really well. The emotion again strong and powerful. A great piece. ~mel

So very touching...because it came stright from ur heart
and thats the beauty, simple yet plusible...
great work...

I, too, did sense the need for more coherent and elaborate details. It seemed to me to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. But then, again...

I see that you're certain not to amend this piece. Still, it's candidly expressed, with bittersweet thoughts of longing to hear one's lover once more... somewhere or wherever... hmm. Just my thoughts anyway. For a short write, you've encompassed so much already.

Nice one, nonetheless.All the best and take care! ~Marian