My Nightmare

by Brittney Follett   Jul 17, 2007


My Nightmare
Brittney Schmelter

Bone-jarring shrieks stagger the night.
Bloody hands and rusted knives.
Scarred soul with hate in-threaded,
Through the night he's stealing lives.

Death-filled whispers of insanity,
In the ears of innocent children.
Chuckles escaping a dry mouth,
The calling of those who cannot win.

Scraping across the eerie floor.
Wide-eyed terror; hands uplifted.
Sense gracefully leaves the room.
Blank eyes - cold hands - body rigid.

Ascending out of lifeless room,
Gasping at life, corpse is shaking.
Dropping the knife; sight unsteady,
Our corrupt master is now awaking.

Body invaded with foreign sense,
Drowning in the waves of ecstasy.
Giggling silently he tiptoes on.
Not a single thought of mercy.

Dancing with his chaotic fantasies,
He marches on through his parade.
He only stops at a quiet house.
The party goes on as rain cascades.

The saddest thing of this story is...
I can only call it: A dream that's there.
Reality and Fantasy are now one.
Though I wish it was just My Nightmare.

Copyright Brittney Follett

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wonderful descriptions and detail in this piece. They made for really great imagery. Nice rhymes and a flawless flow as well. The ending was great too. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, you write so powerful dark poetry, I'm adding you to my favorite authors list. Another one with amazing wording and atmosphere. My favorite stanza is:
    -Ascending out of lifeless room,
    Gasping at life, corpse is shaking.
    Dropping the knife; sight unsteady,
    Our corrupt master is now awaking.-

    I truly like everything about this piece, it's flawless.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Lovin' it too.. I can imagine how scary it is...

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    A very beautiful description of a dark poem. I LIKE IT. The way words are put together it makes it a real cohesive and coherent poem. You have nicely elucidated your nightmare. 5/5

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    I thought parts of it the flow was off but overall it was a lovely piece :)

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