Valentine

by FlashLove   Jul 17, 2007


I wonder
if I would be her,
would you
like me.
I wonder
if she kisses you,
would she do it the way I do?
I wonder
so many times,
If I shouldn't better forget you.
Get on with my life.

I wanted I could
rip my heart out.

Wouldn't that be a great gift for Valentine?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow great work!
    keep it up
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by RealityIsNotWhatItSeems

    I really liked your poem!
    especially the end...
    It makes your poem strong!
    i really like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlindedByYou

    Nice poem, especially the end!
    "Isn't that a great gift for Valentine?"
    Take care ,
    Elien

  • 16 years ago

    by Passionate

    Its a little mixed up... maybe re read it and add a few little words like you and stuff...... its hard to get through. but it has a very good idea from what i get off it. good write
    <3 sarah

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