My Work

by Mousie   Jul 18, 2007


Sobbing and in need
My comfort she had sought,
Lonely in her baren room
Grateful for my knock.

Someone sweet to talk to
A new refreshing face,
Conversation enlightens her
A welcomed change of pace.

Frustrated by the help
And angry at his life,
A smiling face renews his view
Releasing all his strife.

What I've just described to you
Is my schedule every day,
This work I do for others
Cures my walls of pure dismay.

this is about my job, and what each day brings to me, the inspiration and life it brings to me. it's not even a job to me, just a way of being, and i enjoy it nevertheless. enjoy

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    What a beautiful penned, my pleasure to read.... this was so simply but well sending the message...Awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Very good poem...

    Lonely in her baren room
    Grateful for my knock.

    ^ Those were my favorite lines...

    Very good writting...Keep it up...

    5/5.... =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its a wonderful feeling that helping others can make us feel..and you captured the amazing emotion that it brings as well..its not only good that you help people in such a positive way (whatever it may be), but that you feel good about it, and it makes you happy..keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    WOW, i thoguht it was a very good poem. Very inspirational. Your rhyming was good, and the fflow was great.

    "What I've just described to you
    Is my schedule every day,
    This work I do for others
    Cures my walls of pure dismay."

    Favorite stanza^^

    the ending was very well put together

    a well deserved, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! this is such an inspirational poem..im glad you enjoy what you do...

    i love this poem ...from begininng to the end... 5/5

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