When I think of you

by xjessx   Jul 19, 2007


When I think of you
I think of him
and how our love was real
When I think of you
I think of him
and how he might feel
When I think of you
I think of him
and all my feelings grow
When I think of you
I think of him
and how he can not know
when I think of you
I think of him
and let my feelings pass
When I think of you
I think of him
and how we didn't last

When I look at you
I can see him
the love he promised me
When I look at you
I can see him
and all we could have been
when I look at you
I can see him
the way he'd always smile
when I loot at you
I can see him
and life is happy for awhile
When I look at you
I can see him
The love that was always in his eyes
When I look at you
I can see him
and the way he said goodbye

When I talk to you
I can hear him
His voice was warm and kind
When I talk to you
I can hear him
and whatever's on his mind
When I talk to you
I can hear him
the words he used to say
When I talk to you
I can hear him
and the love that's gone away
When I talk to you
I can hear him
the way he could stop my heart
When I talk to you
I can hear him
and the pieces he tore apart

When I'm touching you
I'm touching him
his skin so soft and sweet
when I'm touching you
I'm touching him
and the way our hands could always meet
When I'm touching you
I'm touching him
his eyes, his lips, his face
When I'm touching you
I'm touching him
and all he wants is space
When I'm touching you
I'm touching him
and time seems to stand still
When I'm touching you
I'm touching him
his life, his love, his will

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Really cute poem! you did a great job i think that the repitition helps it so id keep it
    p.s. thanks for the comment! <33

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Great poem!I liked how you kept repeating "When I think of you, I think of him".Very well written.I would like to see more work from you soo.5/5^_^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Very good. Sad but extremely well penned. Reworking the structure is my only suggestion.
    Cheers,
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    I like i the poem though i think it is a little repetitious. still, the repetition does set a mood of sorts and adds a bit to the poem at the same time. either way, nice write, and keep at it.

    p.s. you do have talent all your own though i thank you for thinking that i have some too :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It's a good poem, straight to the point. Do you still love your ex? :(

    Anyway it flowed nicely.. Just a suggestion to use punctuations =) "A poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune"

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