The Hell Within the Heaven

by dollwithafrown   Jul 20, 2007


Jagged lightening strikes the white puffy cloud,
Acid rain comes seeping down.
Tears flood the place of which once was
Empty of anger and clean of flaws.

Angels have all scattered, leaving their wings,
Instead people wake when the Devil sings.
That's not right, why isn't God in our sight?
Surely, once again, he'd make everything right.

What's going on? The image is wrong,
No longer do we hear that heavenly song.
Heaven is broken, why? No one can tell.
Instead it's been replaced with a darkness called Hell.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Love it! Not at all what I had expected with a title like that, but once again your wording did the trick! :] I really liked reading this one, your poems are all so great.

    "Angels have all scattered, leaving their wings,"

    ^^ That line on its own is AMAZING!

    Keep up the great work Dear.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Synh

    This poem was amazing and not what I expected it to turn out to be. When you picked this title, i was expecting a sappy love story and I'm sooooooooooooooooooooo glad you didn't do it lol. This poem is gorgeous and has a mysterious, misunderstood feeling to it, like a child scared of the boogie man in his closest kind of feeling. Excellent poem. Keep up the good writing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Wow very thought provoking I loved it. It was pretty insightful and personally made me consider how the earth was created from chaos and now has almost returned to that state. I loved your word choice also. all in all a great poem 5

  • 16 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Very visual poem...flows very nicely....enjoyable read...5/5 read my latest "A DEMONS PRAYER" vote and comment thank you

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