by Brittany Jul 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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I can take deep breaths, |
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I really like your poem. |
by Jiyaa
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You can make it better by adding good rhymes. Make the stanzas ordered and make a good structure. Poems must follow a particlar structure :0 |
by Fr0g PrincE
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Nice one.... you're a winner |
by Teria
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I really liked this poem, dear. |
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It shows a lot of feelings and the ending was amazing it made the poem amazing! it was very good 5/5 |