You are too beautiful

by Some guy done with college   Jul 21, 2007


I see you there now
i feel like the luckiest man on earth
...but you seem sad
so i try my best to make you smile
but under that small smile you give me
i can sense your unhappy
...months and months go by
i dont see you change
so i ask
"do you trust me?"
she nods slightly
i look at her once more
and everything she is
i try my best once more
to make her smile
but instead i tell her
" i know your sad with me
so i think i will try my best
to make you happy again,
because you can do
so much better than me"
...she cries
...and she cries on my shoulder
she speaks so softly
"I was happy with you..."
"i just thought you considered me
just some other girl for you"
she walks out, while you stand alone
you look for her...
but cannot find her ever again

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    Loved it completely! ive been that way with a guy before..he was always askin me what was wrong and askin me why i looked so sad and unhappy. very good poem tho!

  • 15 years ago

    by TakeMeAsIAm

    Awh. that made me almost cry. greatt :D
    keep writing [:

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Awww that was such a sweet poem but kind of sad
    good job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by rdn 11 2 08

    That poem almost made me cry. if my brother hadn't've came down heere screamin' and yellin' i would have been ballin'!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow beautiful write
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

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