That was great loved the begining and quite original 5/5

Now, lol, I'm especially picky on love poems simply because love is a popular subjects. I've read some that are amazing and beyond me and some that sound like school love notes.
The ending is very sad and understandable. Overall the topic is unique. But you can always make it better by making the reader imagine the setting. EX:

Life is silent till it's fruitful limbs grow barren,
And death, the docter say, is inevitable
Suppressing the tears are no longer a need
What doctors say is never a fable

What more can I say?I LOVED IT! 5/5

I dont know where but i read this poem before, i think it was in the car on day when me n u n hawda were going home. hmmmmmmmm but i loved it dast xosh, 5/5
my fav line,"Yet I will not ask you to be nice.
But don't let me down in my last moments" we all wanna be able to smile at our last moment. :]

So now I am a guest of few days,
Yet I will not ask you to be nice.
But don't let me down in my last moments,
Please for the first time be wise.

is my fav stanza
a very deep loving sad poem. a little tear came to my eye =(. Nice job! 5/5

Omg scared me half to death thinking it was true til i saw the bottom!!! of course, beauuuuuutiful write, and i'm sure you blew everyone in that contest away!!! lol. wonderful job goran, you've blown me away once again. 5/5

At first I thought this was a true piece as usually you write true poems. I loved the emotion yet again you have portrayed into this. As always you go into great depth to show such sweetly sad emotions. Simple word choice which is really effective. Well done. Keep up the good work~mel

Great work that si really good 10/10 i thought it was true at first u put so much feeling an demtion in to it it amazed me. great work. one ? 4 u did u win the contest i hope so with a peace like that. loved it!!!!!!!!

Luv Brittany

Wow...This is just very meaningful. I mean you love her and she hates you. Well she should love you cuz like you wrote this poem for her which is very sweet! I love it! 5/5

Wow
tears are filling my eyes right about now
that poem was excellent and i just loved it
great work
5/5
love always
*kaila*

Just an amazing poem.Every word is filled with emotions of love and life.Thanks for letting us enjoy ur writing.

~Christina~

Oh, wow, i loved this
there was so much emotion
and i loved the structure
and the flow was also very good

and the last 2 lines
are great

a well deserved, 5/5

First of all i hope this is not a poems based on true story, which most of ur poems comes from and the second this that its such dark poem that u acctually could feel each line, and the line that touched me most was,
Consider this note as my final goodbye"
that was so sad and touching.........
wish u the best
take good care

Beautifully sad

This one is a tear jerker overflowing with passion and sorrow. you did it again 5>>>

This was so sad full of emotion. it grabs your attention. is it a true story? you made so its like you were the poem! nice job 5/5

Omg this is very good i can relate
very much great job keep it up!!!

laura

Awww i absolutely love it!! its so sad and full of such great emotion. your writing just keeps getting better. keep up the good work! 5/5!!

Wonderful job
I loved it!
I hope you win your contest
because this was amazing
5/5
as always

Nicely done. Even if it was purposely written for a contest, your character shines within the words you chose. Take care, Debbie