Actually you didnt had to rite the last line down :P ..the poems really damn good..and very relatable..love your work..

~Wake~

Good work i loved it
nice rhyming

I really like your poem

U hv a way with words:D
this poem especially:d
keep up the gr8 writes
bree

Wow I totally relate to this poem NICE work ^^

Noelle

Extremely well written poem , wording was excellent and flow as lovely, you did a marvelous job and very heartfelt as well, I know the feeling you shared , but I also await that person to be, great job your friend Tracy d, 5/5

Romantical and beautiful! And many thanks for the comment! 5/5

Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

WoW!! its really good... ur poems 2 come from ur hart... its really good 5/5!!!!

I read this poem with full pleasure. Keep uo your writing...

A very good write it works out together very nicely and the words jump out and tug at you until you understand them deeper very nicely done kudos

I like the concept of kowing someone is out there waiting just for us. So well written.

I loved how you put these feelings down in words.

bon travail!

Wow lovely poem....^_^ 5/5

Hey Melody, thinks for your vote and comment it mean lot, you are very good at writing poetry all your poems are 5/5

I love it...check out mine leave a comment or rate it i will appreciate it

Excellent words...

5/5

keep up

Thanks for my comment and rating=)

wow
that is a great poem 5/5 defo
i love the words in it and it has a great rhythm 2 it i think =)

Beautiful, I take it that theres someone that likes you but you have someone that youwere involved with and cant let go

Wow, thats amazing.
it seems so like professional,
you know..something you would read out of a book.
that was really good!