Comments : Somebody...

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Actually you didnt had to rite the last line down :P ..the poems really damn good..and very your work..


  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Good work i loved it
    nice rhyming

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    I really like your poem

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    U hv a way with words:D
    this poem especially:d
    keep up the gr8 writes

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Wow I totally relate to this poem NICE work ^^


  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Extremely well written poem , wording was excellent and flow as lovely, you did a marvelous job and very heartfelt as well, I know the feeling you shared , but I also await that person to be, great job your friend Tracy d, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Romantical and beautiful! And many thanks for the comment! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

  • 16 years ago

    by Caro

    WoW!! its really good... ur poems 2 come from ur hart... its really good 5/5!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    I read this poem with full pleasure. Keep uo your writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by collin

    A very good write it works out together very nicely and the words jump out and tug at you until you understand them deeper very nicely done kudos

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    I like the concept of kowing someone is out there waiting just for us. So well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by the song writer

    I loved how you put these feelings down in words.

    bon travail!

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Wow lovely poem....^_^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by onceloved 2

    Hey Melody, thinks for your vote and comment it mean lot, you are very good at writing poetry all your poems are 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    I love it...check out mine leave a comment or rate it i will appreciate it

  • 16 years ago

    by Michel

    Excellent words...


    keep up

  • 15 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Thanks for my comment and rating=)

    that is a great poem 5/5 defo
    i love the words in it and it has a great rhythm 2 it i think =)

  • 15 years ago

    by steve

    Beautiful, I take it that theres someone that likes you but you have someone that youwere involved with and cant let go

  • 15 years ago

    by hadia

    Wow, thats amazing.
    it seems so like professional,
    you know..something you would read out of a book.
    that was really good!