Wow, another one excellently written. I like this one from the beginning to the end- every stanza is great. The flow is very good, too.
I can relate to this one.
You expressed emotions superbly, and you really deserve more then 5/5 for this piece.
Keep writing!

This is a really amazing strong poem. It was an amazing read. It is an absolutely amazing poem. this poem really does deserve more then a 5.

Kale

Ok, well i have noticed that most of your poems are about lost love
and you put them in the "SAD" category

but shouldnt they be in LOVE under

LOST LOVE

just a thought

but other wise a great poem

5/5

This was creative...i love it. it had very good wording, flow and a good beat. keep it up and thanx for commenting my poem.

The way you word things is amazing. The expression you hold through each poem really capture the reader. I loved this poem from start to finish, to me I couldn't find a flaw. A greatly written poem which was created in a different structure which I really liked. Good work ~mel

Kirsty,

What a poignant work. The melancholic sadness and unrequited desire elicited by the character were truly astonishing. The overall rhythm was rather uneven, whereas the pitch and the emotions were well articulated. I truly enjoyed this piece, Kirsty.

All the best and take care,
Marian

Excellent, this piece has no flaws. Flows well and rhythm is there. 5/5

This poem is amazing. Atmosphere is very powerful. Second stanza is greatest. First two lines in every stanza are superbly written. 5/5

Ahh! Ending just blew me away it was so strong! Really liked that some kind repetition didn't get boring at all and made that poem just perfect. Amazing wording. Sad write, it really connects with the reader. Well it did to me.
5/5

This kind of captured my attention. Indeed this piece is really great. The flow was perfect and this poem drew pictures in my mind.

Forgetting me more and more
Loosing thoughts of me in your mind
As there is now nothing left but a memory
All I am is a hole in the earth
But my pain is deeper inside than you'll ever know

I really liked that line and this to me, deserves a 5/5

I rlly like the poem its a real mind opener!

Great poem again from u!!! u r my fav authour on ere!!!

Very goog i like it alot and hope you will write more

Not to be rude or anything, this really is a great poem, but how is it possible to get a rating of 5.1?
I though 5 was the highest rating possible?