Good poem. 5/5

Tears and heartaches was all she knew

Where is says " was "
mabe you should change it to were?

--Trinity
P.S.
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W0w
this is a really good poem
i find it rreally hard to tell the people i love that i cut
for that reason
but im trying my best to stop

I like it, but no guy is worth it hun:)

Wow
I love it
I read all the others as well.
They are extremely depressing, but very good,
im glad you dont cut.
Yet writing about cutting? uhm okay..

either way, you are an amaazing writer.
Cheerr up babe.

Great poems

Really good poem..Once again...Haha...

Keep It Up....5/5

All your poems are great!!! seriously!! dont even know what else to say.. too good for words! keep it up

Nice poem

Great poem i really loved that poem!!!

Great poem, and powerful message to all cutters, which i used to be one. i cut a word in ym arm one day it said -im sry, and i boxed it. my parents were worried but i stopped being a cutter, and so can other ppl.!

xXskullerXx

Wow! amazing poem....i really like it. 5/5

This was rather good. I am going to be honest I hated the last line...but otherwise very nice.

DepthsofPassion

Another very good poem =) I love how strong the emotions flow through your work and make the reader actually feel them =) But I'd change "was" to "were" in the 4th line, it would fit in better ^_^ All in all a fantastic poem =D 5/5
Rhea

I love it i kno exactly how that feels

I know the feeling about this also.. i thought people cared for me and then it goes to show there aint no1 there.. do u really cut? well i like this alot. keep up the good work.. i rated this a 5