My Broken Heart (acrostic)

by Miranda   Jul 21, 2007


Many times betrayed and broken.It's
Yet to be free from pain.

But I have found someone to help
Release these walls.
Deep down my heart
Keeps telling me "You are
Entitled to love again" but my brain says
"Never again will I hurt".

Head and heart.
Eternal conflict.
Alternate opinions.Please
Realize you have the power
To mend my broken heart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    My favorite stanza is the last one. You expressed emotions in this poem on a very good way. i don't prefer love poems like this one but all in all you wrote it truly nicely. It is short but very descriptive and filled with many feelings. I enjoyed reading it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Great job.

    this is a beautifully written poem..flowed good and overall was a great read...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    *Stares wide eyes at miranda*
    My gosh girl! You are talented! I never knew you could write like that. Your better than me:D Lol, I already knew that.
    This poem was very heartfelt. And you did a wonderful job on displaying your emotion's.
    Keep it up hun!
    Elaine.