You really did a fantastic job with this poem, the word choice and imagery were absolutely amazing. Sometimes a little pain is good, it reminds us were still alive. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Very strong poem.. i know the feeling. i read it as if it was me. nice job. i rate this a 5

This was a greatly written a very strong poem in which you have proved that you are really a great writer and very talented. i really loved the word choice by you, but the word gashes grabbed my attention as i think that was a great word to choose to make this poem more greater.
keep up the great job and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Great poem... the rhyming was great. And the feeling there were so intense and so as the words you used. It was really gloomy,mean it. again Great job and keep it up!!!

Great poem! i really liked it alot! i hope u tell me wen u post new stuff!

You know at first when I saw the title I was thinking this is interesting what's it going to be about. The flow was really good throughout it. Usually poems that involve self harm these days tend to be cliche but with this piece you twisted it in your own way and it become creative. Well done a good poem. ~mel

Great job! I really liked it! Xoxox

Ok honest comment, you can be anything but not a poet cause you have no emotion or feeling in your poems, not to be mean but if i was you, i would go and get some sleep rather than this useless poetry. im sorry for the truth.

I agree with mrhope, you are not a poet.

i am not voting because if i do it will be a 1 so i wont do that.

The blood drips away my pain
So much to lose nothing to gain

Wow Amber, this is awesome. Look at those lines...simply flawless and outstanding. The flow and the wordings are great. THis is a strong piece having the lexical and potic qualities. 5/5 all the way

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Pretty good...Like all your wor that I've written so far...The ending was just perfect...

The blood drips away my pain
So much to lose nothing to gain

^ Those lines were so deep...

Good job ...5/5

Great poem!!! this was very deep...and i could feel the emotions in every line!! well done 5/5 for sure

The pain is too much to bear, I can understand that. I can actually feel it. You know, just wanting to break free from all the pain and that you need to cry and all. 5/5

Just reading all the comments, theres a clear " i love your poem, i hate your poem" thing here... and I'm one who absolutely loves this poem 5/5 XD

Another one that I completely understand the pain behind =P Fantastic job on writing the emotions out and making it seem so real to the reader =) 5/5
Rhea

Another one that I completely understand the pain behind =P Fantastic job on writing the emotions out and making it seem so real to the reader =) 5/5
Rhea

So deep and dark...i loved it! You're poems are awesome! Keep it up!