Abused child

I'm speechless, it's so amazing!!

Very good poem, sad too

Hey... Great poem you did a great job and its all true...

Hi! First off, I wanted to say thanks for all the nice comments you leave me. I've been in a bit of a poetry rut, so it was good to still get some feedback.

I want to say that I like this poem of yours, but like isn't really the best word, is it? It's too dark to really "like." But it's certainly....effective, perhaps. I really like that your beat is so spot-on. Most rhyming poems I see annoy me, because they have uneven cadances, but there's no problem with that here. You kept the phrases short and blunt, which I think really suited the subject matter.

I may be totally wrong but... are you the one who has talked about being abused as a kid? I just wonder, because you seem to have a lot of poems on the subject. Anyway, thanks again, and good poem!

I wish that children had been educated better in those days to tell someone they trusted. I think today it is changing...