We Shared a Few Laughs

by unblue skye   Jul 23, 2007


We shared a few laughs...
Knowing it was our last...

We shared a few smiles...
Even in denial...

We shared a few tears...
In one another's fears...

We shared some pain...
Wishing for the rain...

We shared a few deaths...
Crying in depth...

We shared everything...
Until you decided...

To pick up that gun...
And not to run...

You decided to put it up to your head...
Instead of going to bed...

Then that bullet rang...
And let out a bang...

Killing you at impact...
Wishing it was not a fact...

You fell dead...
I saw all the red...

Now, I cried forever...
Hating you always...

Why go so soon?
You're next to the moon...

Now I wonder...
Why I ponder...

Should I go next?
It would be best...

But no...
Someone beat me to it...

I see the red...
And wish I was in bed...

~*~Skye~*~

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©skye

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  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Wow! this was very good. the emotion portrayed is so deep and real.
    i like the word choice.
    a very sad but beautifully written poem.
    great work! =]
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by Willow

    This poem is really sad. the words hold alot of pain. i could not stop reading. 5/5.
    love willow oxox

  • 16 years ago

    by Kiera

    Wowwy..I love it! 5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Woow .. i love it .. i like how u matched the words :D the rhythm was great ... good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia

    I felt my heart break when I read this. 5/5

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