A Mother's Job [Triquatrain]

by aDORKable x3   Jul 23, 2007


Http://thosekidsfromnebraska.com/foxes.jpg
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With four mouths to feed and an endless growing need,
I feel like I'm missing out -
On living my way, not just living for today;
I just don't know what life is about.

It's not that I mind, for I have come to find
That I really do love all my kids.
Even though I growl and even though I scowl
At all the wrongs they did.

They are cute as a bug, even when they play with slugs,
Which still is gross to see
But I love each one; they are loads of fun
Gabriel, Andrew, Todd and Emily.

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It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.

Rhyme Pattern:

(a,a)
b
(c,c)
b

(d,d)
e
(f,f)
e

(g,g)
h
(i,i)
h

. . . and so on.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awehhhh ! Now why haven`t I read this before?! I adore this, it is so cute...and I am sure any Mother that reads this could really enjoy this...I`m not a Mother but I still love it just as much as if I were? Lol. Great job Hunn !

    5.5
    :]
    heartchuu.

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Awww. This was so cute. I love the foxes!! If I would have never looked at the picture I would've thought it was an actual human thing. Lol. I loved this though, very sweet and creative. Never stop! 5/5

    ` Liz