This is a great poem sometimes i ask my self that to when im with my bf ..... but all i need to know is that he makes me smile n would never hurt me haha anyways this is great i love it
5/5 from meee

erin :)

Good job =]]

Pretty good see what imean now short and sweet just like me

Cute

Ya this ones beautiful and the word choice is great. I would say this is a good start. I will give you 5/5

:)
Fsams

Well it was a good poem - straight to the point. I have some suggestion though..

I tell him I luv him
= I tell him I love him

Jus like he tells me he luvs me
= Just like he tells me he loves me

but do i rele??
= but do I really??

Instead of me (askin) him if he (rele) (luvs) me...
= Really, loves

I think (i) should ask myself...
= Capitalize the I =)

(Ive) never felt this way before
= I've

(Hes) all i ever think about...
= He's and capitalize the I =)

but again (i) keep (askin) (miiself) do (i) (rele) (luv) him??...
= Capitalize the I's, asking, myself, really, love.

-Sorry if you don't like my suggestion.. If you don't want to follow it it's okay =)

Its a really nice poem good job

Nice poem//5/5

Lovly! :)

Great poem. good questionz. 5/5.

Love this poem...its beautiful check mine leave a comment i'll appreciate it

I notice sumthing, all of ur poems have the same concept, love, which is my poems i like, hope u make more soon

This poem is really good!
Great job XD

Keep up the good work, I'd like to see more of your poems =]

Again i can totally relate. im actually having to ask myself this question about my current bf...which sucks. but yea good poem...
5/5

Been there i love it its amazing

Really goood poem i enjoyed reaing

keep writing

xx

Such an important question i ask myself too often. amazing poem! <3

This is what everybody, even if they are in love and really know it, asks themselves because I personally don't think anybody knows what love is. It's quite a confusing concept. Well written though, 5/5. Em