I Cant...{Dominic}

by Monica AKA Mika   Jul 25, 2007


I cant stop thinking about you-Your always running through my head...
I cant stop replaying every moment we spent together and everything thats been said.

I cant remember the last time i felt like this,
I cant forget that feeling i got when you and i first kissed.

I cant imagine my life without you here,
I cant picture my days without you close or near.

I cant live without our conversations late at night,
I cant get out of my head how much this relationship is so right.

I cant get enough of your love every hour of the day,
I cant ever replace you because no one can ever make me feel this way.

I cant quit looking at you because you just make me so happy,
I cant figure out how to describe this feeling, i just wish you could see.

I cant tell you enough how much i thank the Lord above...
And...
I cant thank him enough for sending me an Angel to love...

Dedicated and Written for:
Domonic My Boo Booz {3months}
July 24. 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Javier

    You know after reading a lot of these poems i see that you have been through a lot in your life but your a strong person and this was a great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I found this poem to be quite sweet, although I really didn't like the repetition of "I can't" The structure was hard to read for me in some places although I really found the emotion you portrayed to be really sweet and caring showing your love towards someone. So overall a 4/5~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    In all honesty, I particularly dislike the repetition of "I can't..." on this piece. It's highly structured with uninviting points, whereas the sincerity of your devotion to a certain someone deserves to be esteemed by me. :) Nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Awwww!That was a sweet,sincere and truly beautiful poem.It was full of emotion&meaning.I love it!5/5^-^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was a sweet poem, and it's nice that it was written especially for/about someone. However, I found the repetition somewhat annoying. Also, when writing 'can't', you need an apostrophe, and you didn't once use one, which made the repetition more annoying.

    Also, don't forget to capitalise your 'I's.

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