Its a great poem&very relateable.Very good.5/5 ^_^

<3Amber

I loved this poem alot.. i know da feeling.. very well done .5/5

I love this poem... i can defenetly relate to it...very well written 5/5

Interesting poem. It is written excellently, rhyming is original. It is very unique and it isn't classic love poem which is great. I don't prefer love poetry but this piece is good. 5/5

Oh Laura, this is so moving and touching. A first rate poem. smoothly written with a good rhyming scheme. You know the ating I'll give my dear friend...

I loved so many stanzaz that I couldn't pick just one! Beautiful! I can relate to this as many people can.
Charisma*

This is one of the best poems I've ever read! You're in my favs! I love your poetry. . The rhyming is just great. This is just the way I feel:
I lay alone
Alone on my bed
To me love is strange
My heart seems dead
5/5
Keep up the amazing work.

take care

p.s. NEVER STOP WRITING!! ;D

A great poem. Wonderful choice of words. A 5/5 from me.

Ohh...god,great poem:D
i feel the same way as i miss the one i love veryy much

I realy like this poem to
hmm thats all i can say lol
really good writing
5/5 =]

Wowwy. u hav definatly got talent. <3

Great ending and I loved the first stanza. The poem flowed really well too. Nice love poem. 5/5

marcella

Great work, again good flow and nice emotion. Keep it up.

You got a LOT of talent you got great poems! 5/5

Very well structured, written beautifully, and i loved how everything flowed well and also this is a poem i can seriously relate to....5/5 from me

Wow great poem...it has great emotion in it also! keep it up!! 5/5

Wow this is a great poem

I close my eyes
And see your face
I lick my lips
And taste your taste
^^ ahh memories : )

I inhale a breath
But it belongs to you
Why do you haunt me
The way that you do
^^ ok a twist usually it is good to remember someone that you love but the word "haunt" makes it seem bad

That sweet warm touch
Your eyes an empty bliss
Why do I remember
Every single kiss
^^so they really meant something to you

I thought I could be strong
Handle life alone
But the farther I go
Its seems as if a danger zone
^^ a danger zone is a good way to describe it ! good pick

I lay alone
Alone on my bed
To me love is strange
My heart seems dead
^^ i would just get rid of the second alone in the second line it would flow with out it!

In my sleep I feel
Your body close to mine
The dreams of your face
I only see as a sign
^^ what sign?

The morning comes
Another lonely day
"I miss you"
Are the only words I can say
^^aww... the longing for a loved one is always heart tugging

another great job ! emotions were solid and there weren't any real bumps! 5/5

I can relate to this one. The emotions were great. The wording was good and the flow was strong. I gave this poem a 5/5.

I wasn’t too impressed with the title, but I really liked the poem. I think that a different title would draw more people in to this piece.

In the first stanza, I like how you used TASTE as a noun and a verb. Good job.

Reading through the second stanza, I got the feeling (again) that your words just flow out of you without much effort. Many poets (including myself) tend to over think their words.

"Your eyes an empty bliss" I would suggest adding ARE before AN EMPTY BLISS.

"To me love is strange" I would suggest adding a comma after ME, it helps separate the words.

I enjoyed the very last line as well (the dedication). Many people are afraid to use these, but I really think it is beneficial.

Great job again, the flow was great and the wording was good as well.

A few things to look at, but still a good overall poem.