I'm Just Numb

by Good Enough   Jul 26, 2007


My arm is numb
With every slide
Of the blade
Onto my skin

I cut deeper
And deeper I go
Digging into
My raw wrist

Blood drips
All over me
And the floor
What a mess

I cant feel
Anything at all
I have no pain
Just numb

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  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was very detailed, but in a good way because it lets the reader know what it feels like. I also cut (though I'm trying my hardest to stop) and I love that you captured what its like so deeply. Everything just goes numb. Amazing poem, I hope writing can keep you alive, God knows it's kept me alive.
    <3Raych

    P.S. you can PM me if you want to talk.

    And thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Oh i know the feeling oh to well ...been there so many times... hope things get better and this really hit home for me x

  • 16 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    Very....graphic....but it good i like it alot! 5/5