You killed mommy

by sheila   Jul 27, 2007


What you did to mommy wasnt fair
You killed her infront of me
You got a knife and stabbed her
You said i was next
I just sat there crying and sreaming
"daddy please let her go please stop stabbing her"
But when you did it was to late
Bcuz mommy was already dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by shantavia

    Aw was this ture if it wasn't its seem like it was

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This poem makes me feel sad and it gives me some sort of a scared emotion. i think you should describe more pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I hope this poem is friction 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    This poem is good Is it a true story? i rated it 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    This is good but... it doesnt seem like it has much emotion, it sounds more forced than felt.. i say it deserves a 3.5 so ill give it a 4 =D <3

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