That was a beautiful poem. like i said b4 your a gifted writer. and you put alot of emotion in it it seemed like.

I think it had a good ending! i really liked it it was sad but vey emotional 5/5

Seriously.. you poems make me wanna cry lol
soooo sad :( .. i wish a had by boy here too.. to see me wear my shorts :(

lol.. awww

Oh this was so good kaila. it was well writen, great poem...

xoxo,
David

Just like I use to way back when.

Correction: Used to.

I wish you were to laugh at my jokes,

Correction: were here?

A sad poem, but a good one. My Dad wasn't in my life for years and now I live with him. It's hard, I'll admit, even harder when suddenly you're reunited and bam! suddenly you're being bossed around by the man that was never there before. But that's my story, I don't know yours. Anyway, great poem.

I loved it. It was greatly written. and the rhyming has been done greatly, too. the flow was flawless as well. Keep up the great job.
You're a wonderful poet.

Take care

I really liked it.
5/5
p.s thx for the coment
r/c bk

I really liked it.
5/5
p.s thx for the coment
r/c bk

Dubled post lol. got a new laptop and it has that stupid touch mouse thingy and i held the pointer over the button to long. lol

Nice pacing, good format, awesome message. great job, you did incredibly magnificent

your servant:
david

This is by far the best poem I have red today I loved it,
you put a lot of emotion in and you made it sound so real I could picture it in my head

I wish you were here with me today,
So I could laugh at all the things you say,
I wish I could hug you once again,
Just like I use to way back when.

this was my favorite stanza I dont mean to critisize such a great poem but I do believe that the end word of the this stanza wuld make more sense if it said "then" 5/5

Omg... tears again. This reminds me of how I feel about my mom...
Amazing write. Your message was perfectly clear and your pain is very evident. Beautiful write

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