Lost Sanctuary

by Serina the Squid   Jul 28, 2007


I have seen green grass
and the dew upon a rose
I've waded in the chilly slush
that winter's end can bring
And stood beneath a dusky sky
as 'Jays and Ospreys flew on by
Once I held the moonlight
that landed on my floor
I've shared secrets with the wind
and helped an injured crow
I have gossiped with the spiders
that live upon my wall
and felt a bat's wing
as it skidded past my head
I've stood out in the night
with the stars above my being
and swam among the fish
in a crystalline blue sea
Felt the sunlight hit my face
and my blankets hug my flesh
As the morning warmth devoured
the cool rest of the night
In these simple pleasures
and in the haven of my mind
have I managed to escape
a past and still a present
that tears cannot describe.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, filled with deep sadness and overflowing with talent. Excellent job, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by jenna grace

    I liked how you said "your old life".
    worded very well.
    the line about winters end and slush made me go back to a time like that of mine.
    the flow was nice.
    <333

  • 16 years ago

    by collin

    Wow that is amazing truly masterful work your words flow together smoothly and it has a deep perspective keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good imagery
    I felt as though I was standing beside you throughout the whole poem

    In these simple pleasures
    and in the haven of my mind
    have I managed to escape
    a past and still a present
    that tears cannot describe.

    ^^ that was definitly my favorite part
    nice work
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem...i really liked it..and i liked the fact that it was true...i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme but this one just caught my attention.good job! 5/5

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