Don't do it

by jamie   Apr 26, 2004


We were all there
just having a little fun
sitting around in a circle
when someone pulled out the gun
he said he was gonna shoot himself
this kid, i don\'t even know his name, said we were the ones at blame
he said he felt sad and alone, his parents sat at home, arguing over who screwed up the most
not knowing their kid is about to blow the toast
i sat their stunned, in silence , i should say some thing
please just put it away, i really want u stay...
but it was too late
he was already at the pearly gate...

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  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    This poem is amazing i like it i can relate yester day i watched my bestfriend die.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kerri

    hi jamie...your writing is really good...i think you have amazing talent and keep it upo. pop by and check some of mine out sometime...id like to see your opinion of them...im just a starter but hey u gotta start somewhere...also did this ever happen?

  • 20 years ago

    by jamie

    hey anyone who reads this please write comments of all kinds i would really love some feedback on my writing..thanks
    jamie

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