Damn... This is so sad =( I'm sorry for your loss. Well.. This poem has a really nice flow in it. And it's almost like you can really feel the pain of those mother's in this poem. Really nicely done. This really deserves a 5/5 =]

That is really touching. It is sad becuase you are seeing this and you feel helpless. I wanted to help but there is nothing I can do. It was an incredible peice of work.

Wow that's really sad. It gave me goosebumps.
It's an amazing poem, dear. The flow is off here and there, but that's not really a big deal because it doesn't mess with the poem. If that makes sense.
The meaning to this poem is amazing, along with the poem itself.

Keep up the great work dear.
5/5

I think i found it :P
omg wow.. you had me in tears, the peoms is sooo emotioally thought out.. i dont even know how to decsribe it really.. its so well done, and so well put .. a very good dedication poem
<3 angela
added to my favorites :)

Mika,

What a poignant write. How touching. I do find the flow quite uneven on the whole, whereas the poem itself prevails with credibility. Nicely done. You have my condolence for the loss.

Take care,
Marian

Wow. That was beautiful.
Your flow was amazing and the whole peice was just great.
I love the emotion, and the imagry that was in my mind was great.
Once again, great job!
5/5
XxAmberxX

Wow that was really good. And also true it probably happens every day even though we never hear about it. sometimes its just sad knowing that there are most likely tons of people that this is happend too, no matter who you are.

To me the flow was a little off throughout this piece, but the emotion and meaning portrayed definitly makes up for it none the less. This poem was touching definitly a good read and I loved it from start to finish. I guess I'll go with a 5/5~mel

The whole story flows so well and the whole poem is very cohesive making it an excellent well strung piece. Great 5/5

Tc
Fsams

This was really good, the emotion was here and it flawless. Great job!

This poem actually almost made me cry! Great Job!

This is so sad and so true. 5/5

This is such a sad poem! i like it alot tho. i dont know wht its like to lose son, but i know the feelin of not havin money and all that. im a single mom of a daughter of 16 months.. its crazi