What will make you care?

by Laura Ash   Jul 29, 2007


July 26, 2007
Dedicated to DM

The world could come crashing down on me
I could drown in a bottomless sea
I could be hung from 100 feet high
My love could just stand and watch me die
My soul could be ripped and thrown away
I could be tortured everyday
I could be chased by a tiger or bear
All you could say is I don't really care

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  • 18 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Well honestly i'm bearing the same pain so i can really relate on this.. back to the poem, simple and shor.. the imagination were great it could be much better if u put on some ryhme in here. But aside from that, i liked the emotions shown, so intense and powerful..keep it up@

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