Someday

by Serina the Squid   Jul 30, 2007


I'll stay with you for now
But I know this cannot last
My now is for the future
and, time come, I'm out fast
I know plans go a-wry
but, God knows, I'll still try
Everything I am
is based on who I wish to be
I'm going down this road
that I someday hope to see

I'm determined
and I'm structured
I'm planned
and I'm a mess
But still,
I strive for living,
for right now,
I've nothing left

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spidergirl Jess

    Wow this is a great poem, great emotion 5.5 keep it up :]

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Hey you know this one..is actually really good...it hs some truth in it aswell as we all strive to do what we want and at the same tym like you said that we can be strucctured we can also be a mess sometimes!!

    gr8 write
    keep it up

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