Promises

by Christina Yap   Jul 31, 2007


Promises are a comfort to a fool

And I have always been that fool to believe

Every

Single

Promise

You made me

You promised me this

Promised me that

Promised me surprises

That was soon forgotten

Promises,

Promises,

Promises,

Promises

That’s all that you have to give

I promised to be yours forever

To wait for you

For you to prove your love

But how can you prove something so grand

If you can’t fulfill mere promises?

Please stop taking my love for granted

Please stop taking me for a fool

For I can only take so much

Promises are promises

And I believe they should be kept

But just like you

I can break my promises too

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  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    I feel that this poem is not finished yet. There is a lot of emotion into this poem.
    I miss the flow.
    But it is a good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The repetition in this, was strong.
    The emotion's powerful.
    Your style is amazing, I really like how it flows:)

    Your talented,
    Keep it up.
    5/5 Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    You are so full or talent. keep it up i love this one too..

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. the words in this were absolutely amazing. the way you expressed it was awesome. you have such a talent. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    All the poem i have read on yours are worded brilliantly, i love the motion and feeling put into this poem particularly xox
    5/5 from me
    xx

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