LOL. Now thats funny. Ha, great poem, I laughed a lot. Well done, Greta. xo

Well thats odd i guess not something i would expect someone to write about but id deverse a 5/5. it was a good write!

Cute lol. i liked it nice job.

Whoah nice piece of work..i feel too shy to comment on it....but itz nice u knw..gr8!!!..hehe take care!!!

HAHAHA
I love this, I found it to be original and unique in concept and humourous at the same time.
You pulled this of beautifully.

Well it was ok..definitely different but very truthful about sex.. well done keep up the good work!

Wahooooooooo! true poem (not that i would know or anything *guilty look* lol)

nice job on this one...i like it ..flowed great and rhyming was perfect.5/5

This I must say was quite amusing to me. I found it gave me a laugh which is really great because it touched my sense of humor.
Sonnets are one of the most beautiful styles and you pulled it off nicely so I give you a praise for that. Quite an interesting and unique piece, well put together. An enjoyable read. Well done. ~mel

LOL this was a funny piece, and the rhymes flowed effortlessly. Great job! Keep it up :)
5/5

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love it if u checked out some of my poems.... 5/5

Nazeer

Lol, that was very funny. The title is real eye catching. And guess this poem shows us what you like most. :( I'm just kidding.

"Sex is awesome, sex is funny
Sex can help you, give you money"

These lines were funny in a good way mostly because in so many ways it's true. 5/5

This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer

Hahahaha!!! LOVE IT!!! OMG!!! that's cool. Great concept!! not to mention sex burns more calories than any other for of exercise... apparently. really well written, great flow! going straight to my fav.s
hahaha... still laughing. ;)

Its not oyur best but think it worked. I think that it was more of a weird poem than funny myself. But it was unusual which i guess is good :D xxx alex xxx

It sucks how you couldn't submit it in the funnies because i found it pretty funny lol

This is great, i think it's so funny. the meaning is so well portrays in a humourous sense. Well Done
DnB

Interesting piece, very original and refreshing. I like the way you wrote it.
I've never read something like this. You created very good flow and whole poem is funny in a way.

LMAO wonderful poem. The end words that you rhymed with were awesome. This poem is funny but in a sense, everything is SOOOO true about it!!! great job. i loved this line: "sex can flood your life with pleasures using your own precious treasures" that line was great. 5/5

Ha! So true. I loved everything about it and it's about my favorite subject. lol No, I'm just kidding. It was pretty funny though. I'm sure it would have done fine in the funny cat., but darn those rules!!

~Kail