The feeling of alone

by collin   Aug 1, 2007


I have this feeling this feeling of pain
This feeling i get can drive you insane
You get this feeling from feeling alone
This feeling of the lights being on but no one is home
I try to be the best person i can be
If i know you, you know this is me
ive had this feeling but i feel it worst on the days that are the longest
All i can do is pray to the strongest
Religion to me used to be a mock
But now God is my base and rock
The feeling comes mostly when people go
Whether you feel this well.... only you know

"I wrote this poem as a way to drop the feeling it describes it has a true nature and i enjoyed writing it please let me know if you like it comment if you will i enjoy criticism and or compliments thats the only way ill know if you like it so please share your thoughts with me"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Nice poem =]] It really reflects your emotions, and how you feel and stuff! But I think you're not the only one that feels like this sometimes, I guess we all do =] So I can deffinately relate to it ^^

    5/5
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Very sad poem=(... but nicely penned.. the flow was good, and it was full of emotions...great work5/5 ... keep up the good work...*Melody*=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I'm surprised. So far I havn't found a poem to really bug you about. I really like it. I supose I could bother you about punctuation and Capitalization. Mwa ha ha <---evil laugh. Try to put punctuation marks into words like I'm, I've, Don't, stuff like that. Capitalize I as well. I enjoyed this poem. So far you're safe....I will find one. >_< Mwa ha ha! 5<---Yay a five.

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