Wow. This is truly beautiful. Its amazing to feel a love that pure and that enlightening. Glad you could share it with me - it made my heart skip a beat to remember a love like that.

Take care

Mo

Hey this is a beautiful poem! i love how you made it like you were writing letters that was awesome!! 5/5 great job please come and take a look at my poems! thanks
{><God loves yooh><}

This is a very well written passionate love poems that reflects many past feelings of being in love My favorite line "You crossed my path the other day and took the air from my lungs " I love it

Wow...
That was rele Beautiful..
Good Job...=]]

Omg....this is so beautiful!!!..great love poem , ...i loved it 5/5 ...keep up the great work=)..........*Melody*=)

I think everyone has said it, this is really beautiful... good idea on the letter thing, it's very creative and inspiring.. 5/5

Thats really good hope to see more.

Really amazing writing
keep it up

Wow what a butifull poem. loved it

This truly is a beautiful poem. I hope the girl you wrote it for has read it. I am sure you will win her heart forever when she does!

Best wishes and God bless you,

5/5 Ingrid

That was deep. Nice work. I give you 5/5.

Awwwww. that is so sweett...
very good!!!!
keep them coming cant wait to read more poems from you!!!
Fillie

Wow,
nice poem.
It was really deep and meaningful.
It was really touching.
It was really different to the other poems i've been reading. it stands out (not meaning that's a bad thing)
and it's a powerful poem.
*thumbs up*

This was beautiful... Very nice poem...put in letter's form. Bright idea. Good job! :)