This Feeling

by Marius Laun   Aug 1, 2007


I no longer sleep
only resting my eyes
For this feeling
It never dies

I can't quite say
how I feel
I no longer know
If this wound will heal

It sounds quite strange
But I can't tell
Whether this feeling's of heaven
or that of hell

I feel like exploding
It's over my head
Sometimes I wish
that I were dead

To rid myself
of this infernal burning
my mind in circles
and stomach churning

I can't foresee
an end in sight.
Well.... there is one thing
that just might

End my suffering
and my pain
What do I have to lose
I only have gain

To explain how I feel
I would really like to
So you could understand
I love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yvonne

    Oh my gosh! What a wonderful poem! I had no idea you were so good! Sorry about that. But this poem is beautiful! The flow and word choise were really good. Wow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    A very emotional love poem. You are able to augment the flow with the combination of rhyming words. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique poem. Flaw is excellent. Every stanza except the last one is superbly written.
    -It sounds quite strange
    But I can't tell
    Whether this feeling's of heaven
    or that of hell-
    ^This is the greatest stanza in whole piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Good poem.
    Good expressions and flow.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Catie

    Oooo-It was vury good...you expressed how you felt amazingly!!! you did awesome.

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