Damn! I love this one... This is what you call natural poetry. Sometimes I'm trapped in my head too.. Great flow of ideas. keep it up bro.

At the beginning of this poem you captured the way a poet feels at the beginning of his or her poem, but then it turns dark. a twist with you in it. i can see that you are or were a cutter. if i'm wrong you can totally tell it's ok. i want to complement you on your fine writting. really sad, but the truth. keep it up. you're a terrific poet.

Really great, good flow

DAWG, this is intense and serious. You have excellent word play and I hope you really don't bring out a knife.

Wowwwwww do i hear you awesome piece
you got to read my poem called medicate
its got your name all over it

This is so good because it's so honest and it is deep. Well done

Well done .. i Like It makes sence in a disturbing yet real way

Congrats

Adena