well this is another great poem of your that I absolutely love.
the flow was great, the emotions runs so deep. and generally the whole thing was penned so well.
i was taken away by this stanza in particular:
Memories are gone
Because it was never real
How can you remember
If there was nothing there to feel
^sigh. I know what you mean. But I am very much hoping you are ok hunn. and that there is hope. but anyways i'm not gonna try to convince you on here. just PM me for anything.
the poem was great! sorrowful but just beautifully writen.
keep it up! =]
A tear for every word
That is left unsaid
They fall from my face
As I sit on my bed
those were my fav. lines! this poem was absolutley beautiful!it really touched me! i have seen sum of your other stuff and well you are really great!And this was really great! great job! im super impressed!
I thought it was really good can u add ur comment to my poems atleast one of them plz and give me advice on how to make em good
12 years ago
by Beautifully Nothing
Wow...that seriously left me speechless O_O a good speechless. the flow was amazing and it gives you chills. once again, good chills. you can almost feel the tears coming down. you are such a great writer!!! keep it up, love!